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支招小作文(154) | 动态表 澳洲乘坐公共交通的通勤人数比例

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[2023/ 8/ 5] The table illustrates the changes in the proportion of adults who commute to work or study by using public transport in seven Australian cities between the years 1996 and 2006.

【主体段分段】:

<方法1>:按照时间分段

<方法2>:按照趋势分段(本篇文章采用此种分段方法)

 

【开头段】

The table compares the percentage of commuters taking public transport to work or study in 7 cities of Australia from 1996 to 2006.

 

【概述段】

In general, compared with people in other 6 cities, more people in Sydney chose public transport for commuting throughout the decade. Except Hobart and Perth, the public transport in other cities witnessed a rising trend in their usage.

思路要点:

- Sydney数值一直

- 除了Hobart和Perth之外,其余城市的数值都↑ 

 

【Body 1】

We can see that in the first 5-year period, Sydney and Canberra saw a noticeable rise in the number of public transport passengers from 30% to 36% and from 20% to 28% respectively, followed by a slight decline in these two figures by 3%. By contrast, the proportion of passengers in Perth dropped noticeably from 15% in 1996 to only 7% in 2001, before climbing marginally to 9% in the final year.

思路要点:Sydney+Canberra+Perth

- Sydney和Canberra:先上升→后下降

对比而言,

- Perth:先下降→后上升

 

【Body 2】

It is also clear that in the initial year, 23% of the commuters in Melbourne and 13% of those in Brisbane chose public transport for commuting. Subsequently, these two figures experienced a significant growth by roughly 7%. Although the figure in Adelaide remained stable at 19% in the first 5 years, a fractional increase could be found to 22% in 2006. However, the given 10 years’ period witnessed a constant fall in the percentage of public transport users in Hobart, with the figure falling by 3%. 

思路要点:Melbourne + Brisbane+Adelaide

- Melbourne和Brisbane:年分别是23%和13%→随后小幅度上升

- Adelaide:前两年平稳→随后小幅度上升

- Hobart:持续下降

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