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支招小作文(156) I 混合图 工作时长&年假时间

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[2023/ 8/19] The line chart depicts variations in the overall count of individuals based on their average working hours, while the accompanying table illustrates the year-on-year fluctuations in the count of paid holidays spanning the period from 1998 to 2004.

【主体段分段】:一图一段

 

【开头段】

The line chart and the table present information about the figure for people with different average working hours and the number of paid holidays on a yearly basis between 1998 and 2004.

 

【概述段】

It is clear that compared with other two groups of people, less people worked over 45 hours. Also, over the given period, the average number of paid holidays was on a rise. 

思路要点:

- 45h以上的人数始终

- paid holiday整体上升趋势

 

【Body 1】

Looking at the information in more detail, we can see that in the initial year, 10.5 million of the surveyed people worked from 32 to 45 hours, and this figure remained stable until 1999. After

a slight descent to its lowest point at roughly 10.2 million in the next year, a constant growth by 1 million could be found in this figure in the following 4 years. By contrast, although there were only 10 million people who needed to work between 16 and 32 hours in 1998, this figure rose significantly to its highest point at 12 million in the final year, overtaking the figure for those with 32-45 hours of work in the late period between 1999 and 2000.

思路要点:线图

- [32-45h]:年,10.5million→到1999年保持平稳→接下来一年,小幅度下降到值10.2million→接下来四年持续上升1million

- 对比而言,[16-32h]:1998年有10million→显著上升,最后一年达到值12million,其中在1999~2000年的晚期超过[32-45h]的人数比例

 

【Body 2】

From the table, we can see that employees were given 25 days as a holiday in the beginning year. The subsequent 3-year period witnessed a noticeable ascent in this figure to the peak at 30, after which there was a period of steadiness until 2002. Then, two more days of holidays were given to working adults in the year 2003, and people could enjoy a vocation for 32 days until 2004.

思路要点:表格

- 年:25天→接下来3年显著上升到30天→直到2002年保持平稳

- 2003年假期增多2天,直到2004年都有32天假期

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