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[2023/ 9/ 9] The chart below shows the sales (US dollars) of different categories in a particular shop all the year round in the US in 2001. 

【主体段分段】:

<方法1>:按照消费类别分段(本篇文章采用此种分段方法)

<方法2>:按照季节分段

 

【开头段】

The bar chart compares five types of consumer goods in terms of their sales(in US dollars) in a shop in US throughout 2001.

 

【概述段】

In general, jewelry earned more profits than other items in the given year, but male clothing was less lucrative than others.

思路要点:

就全年来讲,jewelry整体销量较高,但male clothing的数据整体较低

 

【Body 1】

In winter, jewelry was the most profitable item, with the sales of $120000. Subsequently, this figure saw a dramatic decline to $80000 in spring, before climbing marginally by $20000 in autumn. Likewise, the sales of clothing showed a similar trend. To be more specific, from winter to spring, there emerged a constant drop in both the figures for female and male clothing from roughly $83000 to $70000 and from $40000 to $20000 respectively. The final quarter witnessed a slight rise by around $10000 in these two figures.

语言点提示:生活化描述

思路要点:前三个类别

- Jewelry:winter销量($120000)→spring急剧下降到$80000→autumn小幅度上升了$20000.

- clothing的销量呈类似趋势

- female和male clothing的销量:从winter到spring,销量持续下降(分别从$83000 →$70000和$40000→$20000)

- 最后一季度两者都小幅度上升了$10000

 

【Body 2】

We can also see that a different trend could be found in the sales of other two types of items. Originally, the sales of cosmetics($50000) were roughly twice as large as the figure for sports($30000). Afterwards, these two figures grew to the same figure at $60000 in Spring. Summer marked the season when cosmetics earned the least profit throughout the year of 2001($30000), after which this figure more than doubled to $70000 in the last quarter. Similarly, the sales of sports decreased to $40000 in summer, followed by a slight growth in autumn to the same figure as it was in spring. 

思路要点:剩下两个类别

- 和之前三种的销量趋势不同

- 最初cosmetics销量是sports的2倍→随后这2个产品的销量上升,在spring达到相同数值$60000.

- Summer, cosmetics销量($30000) →在最后一个季度翻了一倍多,达到$70000

- sports:小幅度下降在summer达到$40000→autumn轻微上升回到和spring相同的数值

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