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The chart below shows information about fuel used in transport sector in 6 EU countries, compared to the average.

主体段分段:按照<趋势>分段
Body 1:EU average,Poland、Spain、Greece【上升趋势】
Body 2:Slovakia、Austria、France【下降、平稳】

开头段

The bar chart compares the proportion of sustainable energy used for transport across six European countries, comparing each country's usage with the European average in 2009 and 2010.

概述段

It is clear that on average, European nations increased their renewable energy usage, while Slovakia and Austria experienced declines. Besides, Greece was the only country that consistently had lower level of consumption than the European average.

思路要点:
- European average数值上升,但Slovokia和Austria数值下降
- 只有Greece两年数值都低于European average

Body paragraph 1

The European average of renewable energy usage in transport increased marginally from 4.2% in 2009 to 4.9% in 2010. This rising trend was also observed in Poland, Spain, and Greece. Among them, Spain saw the most significant rise, with its renewable energy consumption reaching the EU average by 2010. Poland’s usage surpassed the average level in both years, climbing slightly from 5% to 6% during the given period. In contrast, Greece consistently had the lowest figures, with its sustainable energy consumption growing modestly to 2% in 2010.

思路要点:EU average,Poland、Spain、Greece
- EU average:2009年为4.2%→小幅度上升到2010年达到4.9%
- Poland、Spain、Greece数值也上升
- Spain:上升最显著,2001年数值和EU average持平
- Poland:两年数值都超过EU average,从5%小幅度上升到6%
- Greece:两年数值都,小幅度上升到2010年达到2%

Body paragraph 2

However, the remaining three countries experienced a different pattern in their consumption of renewable energy. Although the energy consumption in Slovakia dropped significantly to 7.8% in 2010, it topped the list in both years. The figure in Austria also decreased, falling remarkably to 5.1% in 2010, slightly above the EU average for the same year. Meanwhile, France maintained stable usage at 6.1% across both years.

思路要点:其余三个国家
- 其余三个国家数值趋势不同
- Slovakia:数值大幅度下降到2010年的7.8%,但两年内数值都
- Austria:数值也下降,到2010年达到5.1%,轻微超过EU average
- France:数值保持平稳在6.1%

 

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