Large companies should pay higher salaries to CEOs and executives, compared to other workers.
To what extent do you agree or disagree?
【句子示例】
The incentives of executives are usually aligned with the interests of shareholders. For example, their compensation packages often include bonuses and stock options, which can motivate executives to prioritize decisions and actions that promote sustainable growth and maximize shareholder value.
【解析】
1. 内容维度(Task Response)
这两个句子分析了领导层获得高收入的合理性,比如他们的收益往往和股东的利益绑定在一起。
2. 文脉逻辑维度(Coherence and Cohesion)
在这两句之前,写作者可以考虑说明具有卓越领导才能的人的稀缺性和他们的重要性。再进一步说明高收益也能激发高的工作表现,对于企业的整体发展有益。
3. 词汇维度(Lexical Resource)
“incentive”是名词,表示“刺激”。
“executive”是名词,表示“领导层”。
“be aligned with”这一词组表示“和……一致”。
“shareholder”是名词,表示“股东”。
“compensation package”这一词组表示“薪酬包”。
“bonus”是名词,表示“奖金”。
“stock option”这一词组表示“股票期权”。
“prioritize”是动词,表示“把……优先考虑”。
“sustainable”是形容词,表示“可持续的”。
“maximize”是动词,表示“化”。
4. 语法和句型维度(Grammatical Range and Accuracy)
句的主语是the incentives of executives,动词部分是be aligned with,接着是宾语the interests of shareholders。第二句的主语是their compensation packages,谓语是include,后面是宾语bonuses and stock options,之后是which引导的非限制性定语从句,其中which充当从句的主语,从句的谓语是can motivate宾语是executives,最后是动词不定式to to prioritize decisions and actions以及that引导的定语从句。