新航道托福独立写作范文|像我这样没钱的人

2017年12月17日托福独立写作题目-像我这样没钱的人

Your friend is going to reduce the living expenses. Which of the following way would you recommend to your friend and why?

1. Find a roommate that can share the living expenses.

2. Buy the new technology products less frequently.

3. Shop for less expensive food to cook at home.

2017年最后一场托福考试，要写一篇关于没钱如何省钱的作文。

如果有这么一位花钱大手大脚的土豪朋友，但是又突然想成为佛系青年，不想再乱花钱，你会建议他怎样做。

毕竟人生早已如此艰难，要是再没钱(乱花到父母都不给钱)，那就真的是要遁入空门了。

写作思路解析

题目中所给三个提议，确实都是可以省钱的。找个舍友去分担生活开销，房租，水电费等等，都是可以分摊的，而且每个月房租确实是一笔蛮大的开支，不管是对于上学党还是打工仔。另外，找了舍友，有时还能一起做饭，甚至有的舍友本身厨艺就不错，如果因此导致大家经常在家吃饭，那也能省一大笔下馆子点外卖的钱，从这个角度讲，个提议就已经包含了第三个提议所涉及的好处。不过找舍友有时就像找男女朋友，还真不是件容易的事，如果碰到不好的，各种琐事，比如水电分摊，垃圾谁倒等都可能会引发争吵。

新的科技产品也是个烧钱的货，尤其是刚出来那会，价格肯定是不低，所以能尽量少买就少买点，毕竟以前的还能用(比如手机)。而且新出的产品，有的功能还不完善，有些甚至是噱头大于实用性。科技产品确实耗钱的同时，一个明显的事实不能忽略，那就是本身它们不像吃饭租房，并不需要每个月都花钱，所以即使买的频繁，真的算一算，也没有那么耗钱。

而至于最后一个提议，买点便宜的菜在家自己做饭，既然便宜了，省钱是肯定的。但是吃的如果太马虎，土豆白菜都是买别人剩下的，还真不能保证营养能跟上。再者，有些菜既然店家卖的便宜，那么也许是打了太多农药，变了色，不好卖才讲价，反正无法保证没问题。因为跟健康息息相关，所以还是不能太冒险。

这道题目，翔哥特地邀请目前正在长沙新航道学习的初中少年来写这道题目。他对于题目的分析还是比较到位的，不过对于论点的论证，不是非常充分，这也是不少学生的通病。大家可以对比他的原稿和翔哥的修改稿，看看我都做了哪些处理来帮他完善整篇作文。

2017年12月17日托福独立写作题目

Your friend is going to reduce the living expenses. which of the follwing way would you recommend to your friend and why?

1. Find a roommate that can share the living expenses.

2. Buy the new technology products less frequently.

3. Shop for less expensive food to cook at home.

武同学的初稿：

if one of my friends wants to reduce the living expenses. I will suggest him to choose the second choice.

First, nowadays many teenagers like to make them fashioned so they spend a lot of money om the new tocology products. For example, one of my best friends, called ar, he spends lots of money on mobile phone. Since iphone6 begin to sell in China, he will buy every product from Apple Company, which is very unnecessary. And yesterday, he buys the IPhone x, even though he has no money to sustain the life in school, he still does that. So, I will suggest my friend to buy fewer new technology to reduce the living expenses.

Second, other choices have thier own disadvantages. If you choose the first way to find a strange room mate, you can know nothing about him, even he is a robber or prisoner, But you cannot get this information. On the other hand, if people find a friend or cousin as the roommate, the distance between them will be too close. As an old saying go, the distance creates the beauty, so it is not good for them to be in a good terms. So it will have some risks for people to choose the first method. And third method also has some problems, the cheap food always has the low quality, which means that people cannot absorb enough nutrition from these foods, It is bad for their health. But if people choose the second method, then it is not necessary for them to worry about these things, they should only to overcome their desire for buying technology products.

修改稿：

If one of my friends determines to reduce the living expenses, I will suggest him or her not to buy new technological products so frequently. 

Despite the fact that renting costs us an amount of money each mouth and eating takes away several dollars from useach meal, modern gadgets, if we buy them frequently and even form the habit of purchasing every new one when it is released, would eventually cost us the largest proportion of our expenditure. As we all known,an increasing number of teenagers or adults love to make themselves trendy and are willing to spend comsiderable sums of money in this aspect. Technological innovations, in this case, are able to satisfy their fashion-pursuing need. As a matter of fact, new products are usually way much expensive than they should be simply because manufactures know the mindset of their target consumers-who will not be reluctant to buy the "brand-new" but expensive products. Meanwhile stopping buying new technology products so frequently would not generate any problems for my friend can still use the old ones or just refrain the desire to use the new products. You see, new does not necessarily mean there are any useful functions are added, but may only mean the latest product looks more gorgeously.

As I have just argued, renting and eating cost not that much and the two proposals aforementioned have their own disadvantages. About finding a roommate to share thelivingexpenses, more often than not , my friendis unable to know everything about him. What if the new roomatedoes not like cleaning and always want other to do it? What if he or she is so crazy about partying and always invites a bunch of friends to sing and dance? Or worse, what if the new roommate is a theilf or robber? Some may claim ifstrangers cannot work, how about finding friends or relatives such as cousins to be roommates. As far as I am concerned, if this happens, the time spent with these friends or relatives may be so much that quarrels and other types of  conflicts are inevitable. Distace engenders closeness, as an ancient saying goes. Now as for shopping cheap food to cook at home, the result is not well worth our effort. This is because cheaper food usually cannot ensure adequate supply of nutrients to our body. Moreover, some foods may be diseases-induing. It is true that cheap does not mean low quality, but since food is closely correlated with our health, we certainly cannot take the risk.

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