支招小作文(196) I 静态多柱图 英国小学生通勤方式对比

The chart below gives information about the journeys to school by children aged between 5-10 in the UK in one year.

【主体段分段】：
-Body 1：up to 1 mile、1-2 miles
-Body 2：3-5 miles、5+miles

【开头段】

The bar chart illustrates how 5-to-10-year-old children in Britain commuted to school in a year.

【概述段】

Overall, the majority of students preferred to walk or cycle for journeys that were 2 miles or shorter, but buses and cars were the most common options among those who travelled longer distances. 
思路要点：
- ≤2miles：walk和bicycle比例更高
- ≥3miles：car和bus比例更高

【Body 1】

In terms of commuting distance within a mile, roughly 89% of the surveyed students went to school on foot, almost 9 times the figure for cycling. By contrast, automobiles were less favored for this distance, accounting for only less than 2% of the total journeys. In the 1-2-mile range, walking was still the most popular option, as it was chosen by 73% of the students. The other three modes of transport were less common, with the figures ranging from 3% to 15%.
思路要点：
- up to 1 mile：walk数据，大约是bicycle的9倍，car和bus数据最小
- 1-2 miles：walk数据，其余三种方式区间在3% 到15%

【Body 2】

The reverse was true for longer commuting distances. Regarding 3-to-5-mile journeys, buses took the lead (60%), twice as large as the figure for car journeys. Fewer than 10% of the students went to school by bike or on foot within such distance. For journeys over 5 miles, 78% of the students commuted to school by bus, followed by the figure for cars(29%). However, no students commuted through walking if they lived over 5 miles from school.
思路要点：
- 3-5 mile：bus数据，是car的2倍，其余两种方式数据低于10%
- 5+ miles：bus，car第二，但没有人walk