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In some countries, an increasing number of parents choose to educate their children at home by themselves instead of sending them to school. Do the advantages of home education outweigh the disadvantages？
Children in school not only can learn textbook knowledge but also can learn some skills. When children study in school, they need to communicate with teachers and classmates inevitably.
Home school is for independent study; a conventional school is more like a community, a community where children work with mentors and peers, and this cultivates their “real world” skills in communication and cooperation.
★ 原句中被修改的几处重复：not only … but also … 结构后动词重复；children in school和when children study in school信息重复；need to和inevitably措辞重复。
★ 第二处增添的信息是对skills的细化处理，这里首先使用了同位语成分a community搭配where定语从句，阐释一下常规学校的特点；其次，用and连词连接分句，this指代前一整个分句内容。