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3分钟学会一个雅思7分句(第94期)

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The spread of multinational companies and the resulting increase of globalization produce positive effects to everyone. 

Do you agree or disagree?

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考生是这样写的:

Multinational companies accelerate the development of land, labor and capital. The developing countries can get more technology and funds due to collaboration with other countries.

☼ 考生浅尝辄止,并没有给出针对land, labor and capital的具体解释和例证。

☼ 两句话之间的关联性不是很大。

教师修改后如下:

Multinational corporations help the host countries by channeling financial capital there and offering more varied job opportunities to the locals. Those with capital shortage and high unemployment rate, then, would develop with increasing productive capacity.

☼ 展开具体的解释为:跨国企业能向东道国输送金融资本、为当地人提供更多工作机会、提高东道国产能。

☼ 前后两句构成因果关系,提取上一句中的host countries为下一句的抬头those with capital shortage and high unemployment rate。


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