Task 1
The chart below shows the amount (in tonnes) of coffee and tea imported to four countries in 2007.
The four pairs of bars are the illustrations of four countries’ import of tea and that of coffee in the year of 2007.
In terms of the tea import, the division 【这是个抽象意义的名词：“切分”】 was distinct 【这是个表达程度的形容词：“清楚的”】 , as the UK and the US imported up to 160,000 tonnes and 110,000 tonnes respectively, whereas 【这是个连词】 Germany and Canada were far 【这是个表示程度的副词】 behind 【be far behind是一种表达数据之间大小关系的委婉的说法，没有直接说数字之间的大小关系，而是说数字所在国家的“距离”】 , importing 40,000 tonnes and 20,000 tonnes respectively. By marked contrast, 【这是个建立信息之间的关系的短语，说明了图中tea和coffee的关系】 the difference, between the four countries, in the import of coffee was generally small. The 45,000 tonnes in Germany were more than the tonnage in the US and in Canada by a mere 5,000 tonnes and only more than twice of the total weight in the UK.
Overall, the UK stood out from the countries, as 【这个词引导了一个状语从句】 it had both the largest and the smallest amounts. It is also noticeable that the two amounts made a vast 【这个词，大家自己查词典吧】 distinction 【这个词也是需要大家自己查词典理解】 between the country’s import of tea and that of coffee.
Task 2
Women should, as men do, have the chance to be police officers or to join the army.
To what extent do you agree or disagree?
It is unfair to have even a moment of hesitation when the military force 【主题词汇】 or police force 【主题词汇】 decides whether they will have female recruits 【主题词汇：（尤其指）“新兵 / 新警员”】 . There are two reasons.
主要看点：【“横向”展开论证】：句不是中心句，而很有可能在最后一句 / 甚至彻底没有中心句：
First, a competent 【别用“good”，好么】 police officer should have more than strength and an intimidating 【自己查词典吧】 face; likewise, a capable 【别用“good”，好么】 soldier should have not only a robust body and gallantness. A crucial part of the recipe 【这个词，形象了】 for the professional success in the police force or the army may be what males intrinsically lack – patience and empathy. For example, a male soldier may pull the trigger too soon 【这个表达，形象了】 ; a policeman may never ask the right question during an interrogation. At this point, females are needed. They inherently possess these personal traits and are the necessary complement for their male counterparts. 【好多词要查？查！】
主要看点：【“横向”展开论证】：句不是中心句，而很有可能在最后一句 / 甚至彻底没有中心句：
Second, women have long been deemed to be the disadvantaged group and the weaker sex. This long-established conception is based on the role that women have traditionally played, the housewife, and even on the modern-day professions in which women are normally employed, for example, nurses, receptionists and secretaries, none of which require either physical or mental strength. This is however unfair. 【可还记得经典的“短句法”？】 To reverse the long-term position of weakness 【“不利地位”的意思】 , women therefore need the society’s permit to enter areas of work where some masculinity is required, typically the police force and the military force. This is to create a more gender-egalitarian society.
At this point, isn’t it obvious that Women should, as men do, have the chance to be police officers or to join the army? 【可还记得经典的“明知故问”？】 The answer is affirmative for sure.
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