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支招小作文(171) I 动态表格 四个国家牛奶产量变化

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[2024/ 1/ 6] The table below shows the annual milk production in four countries in 1990, 2000, and 2010.

【主体段分段】:

方法1:按照 国家 分段【本篇文章采用此种分段方法】

- Body 1:Netherlands(始终) + Guatemala(始终)

- Body 2:Australia + Tanzania(这两个国家的牛奶产量 趋势相似)

方法2:按照 时间 分段

 

【开头段】

The table compares the annual production of milk in Netherlands, Australia, Tanzania and Guatemala in 1990, 2000 and 2010. 

 

【概述段】

In general, the quantity of milk produced in all the four countries experienced an upward trend. Also, Netherlands was the largest producer of milk throughout the given period. 

思路要点:

- 四个国家的牛奶产量整体都呈上升趋势

- Netherlands牛奶产量始终(**语言点提示:生活化描述)

 

【Body 1】

Looking at the information in more detail, we can see that the annual production of milk in Netherlands remained the largest throughout the period. Its figure saw a modest drop from 11,226,000 liters in 1990 to 11,155,000 liters in 2000, before rising remarkably to the highest point at 11,626,000 liters in the final year. By contrast, Guatemala was the smallest producer of milk. Only 211,000 liters of milk was produced in this country, but this figure more than doubled to 466,000 liters in 2010.

思路要点:

- Netherlands:牛奶产量始终(小幅度下降→显著上升)

- 对比而言,Guatemala:牛奶产量始终(年只有211,000 liters→随后到2010年上涨了2倍多)

 

【Body 2】

We can also find that the annual milk production in Australia ranked the second place during the given period. Its figure climbed significantly from 6,426,000 liters in the initial year to its peak at 10,847,000 liters in 2000, followed by a marginal fall to 9,023,000 liters in 2010. Likewise, the amount of milk produced in Tanzania witnessed a remarkable increase from 515,000 liters in the original year to 725,000 liters in 2010, after which there emerged a slight decline to 626,000 liters by the end of the period.

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