2021年4月24雅思大作文题目
In many countries, traditional food is being replaced by international fast food. This will have negative effects on both families and societies. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
高分范文及解析
01
The frenzied expansion of international fast food has sparked a debate about whether this type of food should be developed or not. I personally believe that the negative effects of this trend are more obvious than the positive ones.
解析
Ø 传统式开头段，保险且不易出错。通过替换表达“去模板化”。不一定要重复“This will have negative effects on both families and societies.”这层意思，因为已经有“debate”表明了该现象所引发的讨论。
Ø frenzied：疯狂的
Ø spark：引起
02
Admittedly, sometimes, "Whatever is, is right." Socially, since people can eat foreign fast food in their own country, this means that the government allows people to conduct such business. The introduction of international fast food is not purely "alternative" to traditional diet. For example, a very famous fast food chain, considering Chinese people's preferences, launched a crayfish burger, widely popular. This is a good reflection of the fusion of domestic and foreign cuisines. At the same time, the development of fast food restaurants can create many jobs, which can drive economic development. With respect to the family, compared with the traditional diet, foreign fast food is more convenient, so that people can better enhance the efficiency of work and life.
解析
Ø 先让步：存在即合理。快餐盛行丰富了饮食文化，同时能够促进经济发展，并且提升了人们的生活和工作效率。
Ø conduct: 开展（业务）
Ø alternative：可替代的
Ø crayfish：小龙虾
Ø cuisine：烹饪（法）；菜肴
03
However, the disadvantages of this cannot be ignored. First of all, "localization" can only be available to very few western fast foods, and some fast food chains expand at a great scale, which cramps the survival of the traditional cuisines, leading to the loss of traditional cooking culture. This is why A Bite of China has gained unstinting praise among people, because many of us do not know the richness of the traditional Chinese food, as people usually pay more attention to the fast one. Second, from a family perspective, although fast food is convenient, it is mostly a combination of high sugar, salt, oil and calorie diet. It can bring about diseases such as obesity and hypertension if people eat it as a regular diet. Besides, this might put a burden on the family's medical expenses, and, from a macro perspective, on the health care system of the whole society.
解析
Ø 再反驳：国际快餐的盛行会限制传统饮食的发展；常吃国际快餐不利于身体健康，进而会带来医疗负担。
Ø localization：本地化
Ø cramp：限制
Ø unstinting praise：赞不绝口，交手称赞
Ø hypertension：高血压
04
In short, if western fast food continues to challenge the status of traditional diet, the negative consequences will be very serious.
解析
Ø 总结：若任由国际快餐发展，其所带来的消极后果是十分严峻的。
Ø status：地位
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