支招小作文（72） | 流程图4：业务办理

* 非数据图：【流程图】

* 类型三：【业务办理】

* 之所以归于“类型三”，是因为考察频率低。但是，不得不防，而且其实也并不难。

# Introduction

Shown in the chart is the procedure of getting a driving license in a particular country. Overall, the process is not quite complex.

* 本段第 一句是倒装现象。这个倒装句型可以当成套话记住和使用。Shown in the xxxx are/is xxxxxxx.

* 第二句话是对于图的总述，遇上流程图就是“此流程复杂/不复杂”。

# Body

As is indicated, all applications must be made only in the driving license center. An applicant should first fill in the forms with necessary information and then have his or her eyesight tested. Failing in the test will result in an unsuccessful application, and there will be no fees charged.

Those who pass the test will go to the next stage – the second stage, which consists of chiefly two steps. The immediate step is to take the written test, and to successfully get the driving license, an applicant must pass the written exam within a maximum of 3 chances and then pass the road exam, which is the other crucial part of the whole stage. It is notable that successful applicants will be not charged any fees.

Unsuccessful applications, at the second stage, include that applicants fail in all three attempts in the written assessment and consequently have no chance to takes the road exam and that applicants pass the written exam but fail in the road exam. In either case, fees will be charged.

* 注意句子主语/句子开头的频繁变化（尤其是不以“人”为主语时）。

* 注意名词性从句在老章的示范作文里的使用（分别为主语从句被形式主语“it”替代，以及并列的两个宾语从句）。

* 注意句子之间的配合（包括内容上的配合从而构成良好的CC，以及形式上的配合主要是长中短句子的交错）

# Conclusion

In brief, getting a driving license is not procedurally difficult, but there is no guaranteed success.

* 对于图的总述，即使在开头段落已经有了，还是能有一个结尾段落去再次总述更好。

* 老章给出的这个结尾段落的总结的后半句有些思考上的难度。如果无法理解或者学会，大不了后半句就不要了（毕竟你的目标分不会过分高）。