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12月31日雅思大作文示范写作 | 是否应该在食物上自给自足

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2022年12月31日雅思大作文题目

Many people believe that countries should produce food for all population and import as little as possible. To what extent do you agree or disagree?(2022/12/31)


范文及解析

Introduction

In the era of full-fledged agriculture development which is able to satisfy demand of accrued population, many people purport that countries should disengage from the dependence on importing and bear the major responsibility to become a food producer for the masses.Personally, imported food plays an indispensable role and is, in large part, irreplaceable.

 

解析

2022年最后一场笔试,考题是2021年旧题重现;审题时注意关键词 “all population”以及“as little as possible”表述方式都比较绝对化,建议考生可以持否定态度;

full-fledged adj.全面发展的;成熟的;

accrued adj.增长的;

disengage v.解开;解除;脱离;

 

Body 1

Opponents may voice their concern toward the baneful influences importing may exert ,among which environmental destruction stands out for air transport accelerates the depletion of fossil fuel and the toxic fumes , such as sulfur dioxide and carbon monoxide, released from the aircraft are the chief culprit of atmospheric contamination. Never should we pursue short-term profit at the expense of the sustainable development. Being self-sufficient in food production, in contrast, brings tangible boons for local agriculture. Maximizing producing food nationwide while minimizing imports make more domestic producers engage in agricultural production, creating oceans of job opportunities and achieving full-employment.

 

解析

反对进口的人一方面担忧进口在一定程度会造成严重的环境问题;其次,粮食生产上的自给自足也能更好带动国内农业发展,创造出就业机会;

baneful adj.有害的;使人苦恼的;

sulfur dioxide n.二氧化硫;

culprit n.问题的起因;

tangible adj.明确的;真实的;可感知的;

boon n.利益;有用的东西;

oceans of adj.大量的;

 

Body 2

My persuasive argument in favor of importing food, however, lies primarily in the wider selection of agricultural products people can access. Not all countries are endowed with the same geographic features, be it weather conditions, or cutting-edge technologies to breed all the foods that citizens desire to relish. In other words, tropical fruits cannot be grown in frigid areas, which means importing would be the optimal option for indigenous citizens to effortlessly enjoy exotic food items. For example, without food import, by no means would Japanese or Russians be possible to taste delectable tropical fruits such as durian or mangosteen. It is the food importing that allows local denizens accessible to a more abundant supply of food and vegetable, thereby enriching their dietary structure.

 

解析

进口可以丰富居民的食物种类;每个地方的地理位置,气候条件,科技都有差异,很多国家不具备合格的粮食种植条件,只有进口才能更好地满足人们饮食方面的需求;

are endowed with v.天生...具有

cutting-edge adj.领先的;前沿的;

relish v.享受;品味;

exotic adj.奇异的;异国风情的;

delectable adj.美味的;

 

Conclusion

To conclude, I concede that food importing does come with some undesirable side-effects. Nevertheless, it is rather one-sided to deny the rationality of such a practice  for people can constantly benefit from the import of agricultural products.

 

解析

重申观点。

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