1月14日雅思大作文示范写作 | 再次犯罪的原因及解决方法

2023年1月14日雅思大作文题目

Some ex-prisoners commit crimes after being released from the prison. What do you think is the cause? How can it be solved? (2022/1/14)

范文及解析

Introduction

A mushrooming number of criminals, after being released from the jail, will revert to crime , exerting ceaseless baneful influence on the social harmony and stability. Behind such a ticklish problem, from my perspective, are two predominant factors and viable solutions are in urgent need to avert the bleak future.

解析

2023开年的第二场考试，虽然是很多考生害怕的犯罪类话题，但本题以说明文的形式考出，要求分析犯罪分子被释放出之后继续犯罪的原因及解决方法，是一个复古旧题，整体难度并不大；

mushrooming adj.迅速增长的；越来越多的；
ceaseless adj.不断的；不停的；
baneful adj.不好的；有害的；
ticklish adj.难对付的；棘手的；

Body 1

The chief culprit for re-offending would be the difficulty for the criminals to settle down and reintegrate into the society. Indisputably, one of the root causes for anti-social behaviors is poverty, by which I mean living odds force some people to embark on a path of delinquency to support themselves by engaging in illegal activities such as stealing, larceny and the like. After being freed from the prison, with a criminal record, never would it be easy for the law-breakers who lack livelihood skills to secure a job and become economically independent. Another contributing factor for such a worrying trend has much to do with the psychology condition of the criminals. Suffering from improper treatment, be it physical punishment or verbal aggression, many offenders, when set free from the prison, are inundated with resentment instead of visions of life, for which they are apt to fall back into perpetrating crimes.

解析

接受过监禁处罚的犯罪分子出来之后又继续去犯罪主要的原因有：

(1)物质层面：犯过罪的人出来之后在稳定生活重新融入社会上存在明显困难；

(2)精神层面：犯罪分子出狱后会因为在监狱中遭受的一些言语攻击等不合理对待而产生报复心理；

culprit n.不好的事情的原因；罪魁祸首；
reintegrate into v.重新融入；
living odds n.生活窘境；
embark on a path of delinquency v.走上犯罪的道路；
larceny n.盗窃；
verbal aggression n.语言攻击；
are inundated with v.充斥着；
resentment n. 愤恨；怨恨；
are apt to v.倾向于；易于；
perpetrate v.犯罪；作恶；

Body 2

Prickly as the issue is, steps can be taken to address. Primarily,the government should play a leading role by polishing the effectiveness of imprisonment with the aim to help criminals achieving rehabilitation.To specify, job-related training targeted at those released offenders are staunchly suggested ,which enables them to be furnished with some employment abilities ,be it a plumber ,a hairdresser or a driver. In this case, they can be, in large part, encouraged to live a normal life rather than violate the law for survival. Efforts from family members, friends and the society are also indispensable to cure the mental disorders. To elaborate, showing enough respect and helping those ex-prisoners to find a job are great tender solicitude. The general public and the whole society should be made to believe a reformed man deserves a new leaf.

解析

解决方法：

(1)政府层面：进一步改进监禁的教育方式从而达到帮助犯罪分子真正改过自新；比如可以更多地提供一些职业相关的技能培训以更好地帮助犯罪分子保证就业；

(2)家庭和社会：更多地尊重，接纳，包容改过自新的罪犯；

prickly adj.麻烦的；
address v.解决；
rehabilitation n.改过自新；
staunchly adv.强烈地；
be furnished with v.具有；配备有；
solicitude n.安慰；关怀
reformed adj.改过自新的；

Conclusion

In conclusion, the problem for ex-prisoners to resort to offence, notwithstanding its gravity, can be brought under control with both the government and the public shouldering joint responsibility.

解析

总结前文

notwithstanding prep. 虽然；尽管；
gravity n.严重性;