2月4日雅思大作文示范写作 | 个人用水自由

2023年2月4日雅思大作文题目

Some people think they have right to use as much fresh water as they want. Others otherwise believe governments should strictly control the use of fresh water as it is a limited resource. Discuss both views and give your own opinion. (2023/02/04)

范文及解析

Introduction

With the boom of population and blossom of industry, the demand for fresh water, a limited resource, has been surging at an alarming rate. Some people, accordingly, advocate to tighten the control over fresh water consumption, which is in contrast to the view that people are entitled to use water recklessly.

解析

本题是2016年的原题重现，形式是双边观点类，讨论关于淡水资源使用的问题；审题时需要注意前者观点中的绝对化表达as much as they want 以及后者的tightly control的程度；

boom n.迅速发展
blossom n.繁盛，兴旺
are entitled to v.享有
recklessly adv.鲁莽地；不顾一切地

Body 1

Water, one of the most valuable natural resources on the earth, is the lifeblood of life and the link that binds all living beings on the planet. The public, as is argued by a group of people, should enjoy the basic right to access sufficient fresh water in their daily lives for domestic purposes, be it preparing food or doing the laundry. Additionally, the industrial production is in correspondingly more dependence on water resources, be it fueling the manufacture of commodities or contributing to the agricultural irrigation.  Without the unfettered access to water，people’s fundamental needs cannot be satisfied， which further spawns more life and social problems. The restricted use of water,for example, engenders less irrigation on agriculture, which will induce the deduction of food output, thereby triggering the latent threat of famine.

解析

水资源，生命的源泉，毋庸置疑对人类以及其他生物的生存来说都非常重要；无论是日常生活中人们的吃穿住用行还是社会工业生产都对水资源有着严重的依赖性；没有足够的水资源供给，人们的日常生活会受到影响同时社会各领域发展必将受到阻碍；

lifeblood n.生机的根源；生命必须的血液；
bind v.捆绑，系；包扎；使紧密联系；
unfettered adj.自由的；无拘无束的；
spawn vt.酿成，造成;
engender vt.使产生；造成；
latent adj.（性质，状态）潜在的，隐藏的；

Body 2

Nonetheless, from my perspective, despite the indispensable role it plays, finite water resources, the fresh potable water in particular, could not bear lavish and infinite exploitation of we human beings. Meanwhile, A ballooning number of population has occasioned mushrooming water demands globally, but the awareness of water saving is lost when. A raft of people are seen using water prodigally in many cases such as watering bodies more than one hour or brushing their teeth with tap water running. Without conservation efforts, water scarcity is bound to be ticklish global issue. By this token, strict governance is of paramount significance in ensuring sustainable utilization of water. The government, as the one most capable and likely to address any social issues, is supposed to enact tougher laws and carry out relevant punishment such as imposing a price hike or heavy fine to accomplish the purpose of deterrent, constricting large companies and individuals from unnecessarily and improvidently clearing water. 

解析

政府为什么要管控：有限的水资源永远无法满足人类对于它们的无限需求,同时很多人也缺乏节约用水的意识，水资源短缺问题越发严重,因此政府的严格管控有着比较重大的意义；

政府如何管控以及是否具有有效性：政府作为整个社会的管理协调者，也是最有能力最有可能解决社会问题的主体，可以通过颁布更严的法律同时配备相关处罚措施达到管控使用水资源的目的；

potable adj.适于饮用的；可饮用的;
lavish adj.浪费的；无节制的；
ballooning adj.急速增长的；
occasion vt.引起；造成；
mushrooming adj.急速增长的；
a raft of 大量的;许多;
prodigally adv.浪费地；
ticklish adj.棘手的；难对付的；
paramount adj.至为重要的，首要的；
address vt.设法解决；处理；
enact v.制定，通过，颁布（法令）
price hike n. 提价；
deterrent n.威慑，遏制；威慑武器
improvidently adv.浪费地；无远见地；奢侈地；

Conclusion

To recapitulate, water, in view of its insufficiency, is in desperate need for preservation with acts from the government and the public should also be warned not to be extravagant with such precious resources and economize on fresh water resource with such petty matters as taking a quick shower and fixing dripping taps, shouldering the responsibility by actively engaging in sharing the burden.

解析

recapitulate vi.概括；重述要点；
extravagant adj.奢侈的，挥霍的；
economize vi.节约，有效利用；
petty adj.小的；轻微的；

重申观点：水资源有限，政府需要进行管控，个人同时也应该通过自己的行为积极参与；