流程图:类型一【制作工序】
写作关键:1)避免简答题式的写作(短小的句子扎堆;句子开头/主语趋同)。2)表工艺的动词;3)表过程中半成品的名词。4)通用的名词和动词。5)其它。
【开头段】
Shown in the diagrams are the process of cement production and that of using cement to produce concrete. Overall, the first process is complex, and the second is simple.
• 线图习惯用“graph”,饼图和柱/条状习惯用“chart”,流程图习惯用“diagram” 。
• 句开头的【倒装】。注意动词的单复数由倒置后的主语决定。
• 第二句是对于图表的【综述】,简要的讲一下流程图的【宏观全貌】。【套路】是写“图中的流程是复杂还是简单”。
• 注意句“and”前后的平行。
【主体部分第1段】写【制作水泥】
1. Cement production begins with putting limestone and clay – the raw materials – through the crusher to produce mixed powder.
2. The mixture needs to be further blended in the next device – the mixer.
3. Then, the mixture is transported into the rotating heater, which rotates in a clockwise direction.
4. At this step, heat is applied at the open end.
5. As the mixture is heated, it becomes a hot substance, which is the semi-product, for the final step.
6. The final step is to mill the hot substance into the ground cement, which will be bagged and used for the production of concrete.
• 第二句中,be further blended可以替换为“be thoroughly blended”或“be homogenized”。
• “begins with”、“Then”、“At this step”、“As … (表时间/逻辑顺序的状语从句)”、“The final step”用来组织步骤的顺序。这些是文章脉络的得分的重点。
• 表工艺的动词是词汇得分的重点。
【主体部分第2段】写【制作混凝土】
To manufacture concrete, sand, gravel, and water are other essential components in addition to cement. Their proportions are 25%, 50%, and 10%, and cement constitutes the other 15%. As those raw materials are put into the concrete blender that turns clockwise, concrete is being produced.
• 右边的图,其实是个饼图。
• 句话,承上启下,让两个段落形成联系。这是文章脉络的得分的“妙笔”。
• 表工艺的动词 以及 通用的动词 是词汇得分的重点。
【结尾段】
Overall, the entire process, including making cement and using it to make concrete, is of certain complexity, going through a series of steps and a number of apparatuses.
• 如果开头段有了对于图表的综述,【其实可以没有结尾段】。
• 但是,要是想多拿分,写一个“加强版”的【图表综述】是必要的。
• 注意句“including”中“and”前后的平行。
注意【be + of + 名词】=【be + 这个名词对应的形容词】。例如:It is of social significance. = It is socially significant. 句中的“is of certain complexity” = “be complex to some extent”。
• 注意【伴随状语】,逻辑是“伴随着主句所讲的事情而发生”,功能是1)表结果;或2)表补充说明。这里是功能2)。
补充知识点:
1) 英语的宏观逻辑模式是“总——分”。
段落和单句都习惯采用这种模式。
单句举例:
It is a good idea that we go to the zoo.
首先让人知道“It is a good idea”,再让人知道“a good idea”是“that we go to the zoo”。
这个逻辑区别于中文的逻辑(如下)
That we go to the zoo today is a good idea.
2)构成的动词短语注意:
整体 consists of 几个部分。
整体 is composed of 几个部分。
几个细节 constitute 整体。
某个细节 constitutes 占比/多大的部分。如:My salary constitutes only a moderate portion of my income.
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