九月场雅思小作文,又迎来了表格。掐指一算,表格图连考了两场啦! 一起来看看,如何破解吧~
2022.9.3考场小作文真题
The table below shows the consumption of four kinds of dairy products per person per year and their changes in percentage in Australia from 2011 to 2015.
【此图的考核要点:同项不同时,连续时间(线性变化)类】
数值分组加工,确定写作内容:
1.Milk vs Butter— 所有年份中的“值 vs 最小值”;前者数值变化小,后者变化更显著
2.Cheese vs Yogurt — 数值变化幅度较小,且后者是数值减少的项目
【Introduction: 概述图表大致内容—连续五年间(2011-2015),四类乳制品消耗量的变化】
The table illustrates the changing amount of four categories of dairy products consumed in Australia over a five-year period of 2011 to 2015.
【Body 1: 主体段拆解分析具体数值情况。主体段落一:先分析Milk特征,即“消耗量,远超其他三类产品”】
Milk was most notable among the four products because its consumption far exceeded those of the remainders. [用状语从句引出数据之间的关系作为语法亮点] In Australia, over 100 litres of milk were consumed each year, with merely 1% growth found. [独立主格结构] By stark contrast, despite a 8-percent steep growth, people consumed a particularly small portion of butter, whose figure ranged from 3.6 kg to 4 kg. [定语从句]
remainder n. 剩余物
steep adj. 急剧的 [使用程度修饰词,细化增减幅度的比较]
【Body 2: 接下来,分析剩余两类产品】
In terms of the consumption of cheese and yogurt, there was a different situation. Specifically, although cheese ranked below milk, with a moderate amount eaten, it was the only category whose figure stayed constant at around 13.6 kg. [定语从句] Similarly, the initial four years witnessed the consistent level of yogurt purchased by each individual, at 7.4 kg, while a slight drop was observed in 2015, when the figure declined by 0.2 kg. [定语从句]
moderate adj. 中等的
consistent adj. 不变的
【Conclusion: 结尾部分,给出对表格内容的宏观总结】
Overall, individuals in Australia showed greatest preference for milk, while the other three items were much less desirable.
desirable adj. 渴望获得的
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