支招小作文（113） | 柱图 杂志销售额

The graph below shows percentages of sales of five kinds of magazines sold by a company in the UK between 2001 and 2009. 

【10月8日考场小作文-柱图】：数据表现形式更直观。

此图也能够转换为【表格】的形式（如下）。

观察分析可得，各年份中，该地区五类杂志的总数均为100%，故此图也能以【饼图】的形式出现。

【首段内容的“三言两语”。就此图而言，如划线部分所示，需涵盖内容有：1.数值描述对象+ 2.地点信息+ 3.时间信息】

The bar chart illustrates the changes in the popularity of five specific categories of magazines which a company sold in the UK in three separate years: 2001, 2005 and 2009.

【主体段1: 数据分组1:杂志类型（音乐类+体育类）。两者共同特征在于，整体变化幅度不大，且首尾两个年份数据相比，几乎没有变化。】

In all three years, music magazines draw immediate attention for the particularly low popularity, as the sales stagnated at 10% despite a slight drop of 5% in 2005. [原因状语从句] Similarly, no remarkable changes were observed in the sales of sports magazines, with the proportion being within a narrow range of 20% to 25%. [独立主格结构]

词汇小结：

1. draw immediate attention for sth. (意为“引人注目”；可用于引述重要的数据特征)

2. stagnate （v.停滞）

3. be within a narrow range of （在…和…的狭小范围内）

【主体段2: 数据分组2: 销量有显著变化的其余三种杂志：【社会+经济+电影】。段落内部，再次细分为：1.社会类杂志：销量暴跌；2.经济类+电影类：销量大幅攀升】

Meanwhile, it is also notable that social magazines, the best-seller in 2001, [同位语成分] experienced a 35-percent slump in 2009, when the sales of this category bottomed out at 5%. [定语从句] By stark contrast, the year of 2009 witnessed that magazines related to economics and movies became increasingly sought-after publications, as the sales grew substantially to 35% and 30% respectively, taking the lead in this year. [最后一句：宾语从句+原因状语从句+伴随状语]

词汇小结：

1. best-seller n.畅销品

2. slump n.（销量）猛跌

3. bottom out 跌至谷底

4. by stark contrast 形成鲜明对比

5. sought-after adj.广受欢迎的

6. publication n.出版物

7. substantially adv.可观地

【结尾：笼统写；关注：程度修饰词的使用，突出[各自特征不同]】

Overall, sports magazines and music magazines were vastly different from the three remainders in terms of sales and the pattern of change.