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支招小作文(146) | 动态柱 五个国家电影产量

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[2023.6.10] The bar chart below shows the number of films produced in five different countries in 2007, 2008, and 2009. 

【主体段分段:按照国家分段】

Body 1:Country ABC

Body 2:Country DE

 

【开头段】

The bar chart compares the number of films produced in 5 different countries in three consecutive years: 2007, 2008 and 2009. 

 

【概述段】

Overall, compared with other four countries, more films were shot in country A. Also, this country witnessed the greatest change in the film production.

思路要点:

1- country A在三年中数值

2- country A变化幅度

 

【Body 1】

It is noticeable that in both 2007 and 2008, roughly 45 films were produced in country A, after which this figure almost doubled in 2009. Although country B was the place where 40 films were released in the initial year, this figure saw a steady decline by 10 in the subsequent 2 years. Conversely, the given 3-year period underwent a noticeable climb in the number of movies made in country C, with the figure growing from 30 in 2007 to 40 in 2009.

思路要点:

- Country A:前两年平稳,随后数量翻倍

- Country B:逐年下降

- Country C:显著上升

 

【Body 2】

We can see that the other two countries did not grab much attention by film producers. Specifically, between 2007 and 2008, there emerged a dip from 25 to 20 in the figure for movies released in country D, followed by a insignificant increase to its 2007 figure in the final year. Oppositely, the quantity of films produced in country E rose slightly from only 20 in 2007 to the peak at 25 in 2008, before falling marginally by 5 in the next year.

**语言点提示:生活化表达

思路要点:

- Country D和Country E整体数量较低

- Country D:小幅度下降→小幅度上升

- Country E:小幅度上升至峰值→小幅度下降

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