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[2023/ 10/21] The maps below show the Riverside Park in 2010 and the Riverside Park now.

【主体段分段】:一图一段

 

【开头段】

The maps compare the layout of Riverside Park in 2010 and now.

 

【概述段】

In general, the park has witnessed remarkable changes, and more leisure facilities have been constructed.

思路要点:

- 整个区域变化大

- 休闲功能区增多

 

【Body 1】

In the initial year, we can see that in the northern side of the park, a river flew from the west to the east. To the south of it, another river ran from the northeast to the southwest, with a toilet lying to the western side. In the southwestern corner of the park, there were some trees and some car parks. On the eastern side, a heritage railway traveled through the park from the north to the south.

思路要点:2010 年(一般过去时)

- 公园北面,有一条西→东的河

- 在它南边有另一条东北→西南走向的河,这条河西边有一个toilet

- 公园的西南角,一些树和一些停车场

- 公园最东边,有一条南北走向的heritage railway

 

【Body 2】

At present, we can find that in the northern part, a cycle path has been built to the southern bank of the river. Looking at the southern part, there were no changes to the previous toilet, trees and car parks. Besides, a cafe, some swings, sports fields and a station have appeared to the western side of the river, with a newly constructed parking and hotel located to the opposite side.

思路要点:

- 北面河流的南岸,新建了一条cycle path

- 南边原来的toilet、trees和car parks没变化

- 南边河流的西边,新增了swings, sports fields 和一个station;河对岸新建了一个parking和hotel

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