支招小作文(197) I 动态饼 学生选课对比

The pie charts below show the percentage of students in one adult education center taking various courses offered in 1985 and this year.

【主体段分段】：
Body 1：1985年 数据对比（一般过去时）
Body 2：趋势描述（现在完成时）

开头段

The charts compare changes in the proportion of students who chose a variety of courses in an adult educational institution for the year 1985 and today.
 
概述段

Overall, Art and Modern Languages enjoyed the greatest popularity in the initial year, but IT dominated students’ preferences today. Besides，Fitness and Dance was the only course whose figure remained stable.
思路要点：
- 年黄色(Art)、灰色(Modern Languages)都比较大，但第二年IT
- 只有浅蓝色(Fitness and Dance)不变

Body paragraph 1

In 1985, Modern Languages(including French, German and Spanish) were selected by 24% of the students, a figure slightly higher than the enrollment for Fitness and Dance(22%). Art courses came third in the preference list, attracting 17% of the students. Local History and Cookery shared a similar figure in application, with 15% and 14% respectively. By contrast, only 8% of the students applied for Music Appreciation this year.
思路要点：1985年
- Modern Languages数据，Fitness and Dance第二，Art第三
- Local History 和Cookery数据相似
- Music Appreciation数据

Body paragraph 2

At present, the distribution of enrollments for different courses has witnessed significant changes. This is especially noticeable for IT—with 27% of the students enrolled in this course, it has become the most dominant choice in this institution. By contrast, Art has become the least popular course, with its figure falling marginally to only 15%. Although Modern Languages were more attractive than other courses in the initial year, its popularity has seen a remarkable drop by 7% today. Fitness and Dance was the only one that has experienced no changes in its appeal, while there has been a modest growth in the popularity of Cookery to 19%.
思路要点：this year
- IT数据
- Art数据轻微下降
- Modern Languages数据显著下降
- Fitness and Dances数据不变
- Cookery数据轻微上升