支招小作文(198) I 动态线图 五个欧洲国家员工病假对比

The chart below shows the percentage of workers from five different European countries who were absent for five days due to illness from 1991 to 2001.

【主体段分段】：
按照<变化幅度>分段
Body 1：Netherlands, France and Sweden 一段(变化幅度大)
Body 2：UK, Germany一段（变化幅度小）

开头段

The line graph illustrates changes in the proportions of employees who were absent from work due to illness for 5 days in Netherlands, France, Sweden, Britain and Germany between 1991 and 2001. 

概述段

Overall, France witnessed the most dramatic change in the rate of illness absence, while the figure in Germany and UK remained relatively stable. Also, Germany had the lowest absence rate throughout the given period.

思路要点：
- France变化幅度
- Germany和UK幅度较小
- Germany数值一直

Body paragraph 1

Looking at the information in more detail, we can see that the figures in Netherlands, France and Sweden had seen more noticeable changes in the given decade. Specifically, there was a sharp increase from 4.8% to the peak at 5.5% between 1991 and 1992 in Netherlands, followed by a significant drop to only 4% in the next 4 years. Similarly, after a slight rise to roughly 5.1% in 1992, the figure in France fell remarkably to only 3% in 1996. Subsequently, the former saw a noticeable growth by 1.5% in 2001, whereas the latter kept stable until the final year. By contrast, Sweden witnessed a marked rise in the percentage of sick leave from 3% to 4.6% in the 10-year period, overtaking the figure in France in 1996.

思路要点：Netherlands，France，Sweden

- 幅度较大
- Netherlands：1991-1992急剧上升到峰值→到1996年显著下降  
France：1991-1992轻微上升→到1996年显著下降
- 1996-2001：Netherlands显著上升，但France保持平稳
- Sweden：1991-2001显著上升，1996与France数据有交点

Body paragraph 2

However, such significant changes were not seen in the other two countries. Originally, only 2.1% of the staff in UK asked a leave from work because of illness. Afterwards, this figure underwent some fluctuations and finally climbed by roughly 0.2% in 2001. Likewise, although the first 2 years experienced a modest decline in the illness absence rate in Germany from 1.8% to 1.5%, this figure maintained roughly unchanged until the end of the period.

思路要点：UK, Germany

- 变化不显著
- UK：年2.1%→随后波动→2001年上升了大约0.2%
- Germany：前两年从1.8%小幅度下降到1.5%→到2001年基本持平