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支招小作文(228) I 动态表 三年中收入和消费变化

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The table below shows the income and expenditure of Harckley Hall, a public place for hiring over the period of three years.

主体段分段:按<名称类别>分段
Body 1:Total Income,Expenditure,Profit
Body 2:四种收入来源

开头段

The table illustrates changes in the revenue and expenses of Harckley Hall (an employment center) over a 3-year period.

概述段

It is clear that room-hiring consistently accounted for the largest share of revenue. While total income underwent an upward trend, total expenditure dropped with a more significant rate, resulting in a decrease in overall profit over the period.

思路要点:
- income of hiring room数值一直高
- total income上升,但expenditure下降幅度更大,profit呈现下降趋势

Body paragraph 1

On the whole, total income increased f r o m £83,500 in Year 1 to a peak of £85,000 in Year 2, before falling back to £84,000 in the last year. The total expenditure, however, saw a continuous rise f r o m £56,000 to £62,000 over the 3 years, narrowing the gap with the total income. As a consequence, the overall profit fell considerably f r o m £27,500 to £22,000. 

思路要点:Total Income,Expenditure,Profit
- Total Income:第一年为£83,500→随后第二年达到峰值£85,000→第三年小幅度下降到£84,000
- Expenditure:第一年£56,000→持续上升,第三年达到£62,000,与total income差距缩小
- Profit:从£27,500显著下降到 £22,000

Body paragraph 2

Regarding specific revenue sources, we can f i n d that room-rental income increased slightly f r o m £34,000 to £35,000 during the first two years, before dropping remarkably to £32,000 in Year 3. Conversely, there was a modest decline in income from running the Café, falling from £3,500 in Year 1 to £3,000 in Year 2, followed by a noticeable increase of £1,000 in Year 3. As for funding, the local council donated £22,000 annually for the initial 2 years, after which this figure dipped marginally to £21,000 in the subsequent year. In comparison, funding from other sources steadily increased from £24,000 to £27,000 over the 3 years.

思路要点:四种收入来源
- 两种income方式数值呈现相反趋势
- Income of Hiring Room:第一年为£34,000→小幅度上升第二年达到£35,000→显著下降第三年达到£32,000
- Income of Cafe:第一年为£3,500→小幅度下降第二年达到£3,000→第三年显著上升了£1,000
- funding from local council:前两年平稳在 £22,000→第三年小幅度下降到 £21,000
- funding from other sources:第一年£24,000→持续上升,第三年达到£27,000

 

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